Welcome to Friday Fiction, hosted this
week by Karlene over at Undaunted Devotion. Don’t miss the other submissions
for your weekend reading pleasure!
My wonderful Nancy’s birthday was this
week, so I wanted something special for her. We’ve been working on Steampunk
costumes for a little while now. If you don’t know what Steampunk is, think
Jules Verne taken to the next level. Steampunk is a genre of fiction and costuming/cosplay
that imagines a Victorian Era wherein Mad Science truly ruled, and fantastic
inventions powered by steam and clockwork were commonplace – where the skies
were crossed by behemoth dirigible airships, and men such as Nikola Tesla were
the most celebrated heroes of all.
Nancy’s Steampunk character is still in
development, while mine is fairly well defined, so I’ve been a bit vague on
hers in this sketch. Still, I wanted to have some fun with the characters, and
just explore a little bit how they might interact given the current direction
they’re going. The setting is the very early 1900s, in the southern part of the
Arizona Territory. I hope you enjoy this brand-new piece of fiction!
Steampunk Characters
An Experimental Sketch
He waited in subdued light. The only
window not fully shuttered was the one he sat beside, and it was only open
enough for him to watch the street. His hat hung on the nearby bedpost, and his
weapon rested across his legs. With a stained and faded bandana, he mopped the
sweat from his forehead. While the worst of summer was over for the year, it
was still hot, and whatever breeze might have been blowing outside did not find
its way to the narrow gap in the window.
The rumored riders should arrive
soon, provided the information was reliable. The nearby copper mine took
careful measures to protect the secret of when the couriers with the payroll
would arrive, but information could be obtained in many ways, including from
sullen clerks after a few too many drinks. He hadn’t even needed to buy a round
for the two underpaid men.
Two horsemen came around the
buildings at the far end of the street, and he leaned closer to the window. The
weapon was in his hands without so much as a conscious thought, but he kept the
barrel well within the dark room. All it would take was a stray glint of metal to
betray his presence, and ruin all his preparations. I been waitin’ a long time for this one, and I might not get another
shot.
The two riders dismounted in front
of the mercantile, seemingly unconcerned with the possibility that they were
being watched. If this is them, they’re
either certain the secret is safe, or they’re foolishly confident in their
ability to handle trouble.
He brought the end of the barrel to
rest just inside the window, where he could easily lift it and aim quickly.
Continuing to watch, his focus narrowed on the two men. They did not enter the
mercantile, but stood chewing the fat as though waiting for someone. That fits the information – act like they
ain’t got nothin’, so’s nobody has any cause to think they have somethin’. This
has gotta be them.
A commotion erupted from somewhere
farther up the street, and he shouldered the weapon. He slipped the trigger
from the safe position to the ready, and used the barrel to push the shutter
just a bit farther open. Shouts of surprise and alarm drew closer, along with a
chaotic mechanical sound.
The two riders stood staring up the
street with confused looks. Don’t just
stand there like a couple of ninnies – move, you fools!
An old brass Automaton careened into
view, kicking up dust in its chaotic path and filling the air with oily smoke
and steam. He aimed his weapon at the dull, oxidized torso and tracked it as it
came closer. When it reached the middle of the street nearest to him, he pulled
the trigger. The room filled with a rapid popping sound, just before a blinding
arc flashed from the barrel out to the metal man in the street.
The Automaton spun in place, with
its arms twitching as though it were having a seizure, before it simply
stopped.
He held the weapon in his left hand
and threw the window open with his right. Drawing his old revolver with his
right hand as he climbed out the window, he scanned near the two riders for his
real objective. A man dressed in old cavalry trousers and a stained muslin
shirt stood just outside the mercantile, and for just a moment, he caught the
man’s eyes. There was surprise and fear in the man’s eyes, and he turned to
sprint up the street.
He gave chase, with the Lightning
Rifle in his left hand, and the now-cocked revolver in his right. He didn’t
bother yelling. In all his apprehensions as an Arizona Ranger, he’d never had
an outlaw that had just stopped and surrendered because he shouted.
The man ducked between two
buildings, maybe fifty yards ahead of him. If
he’s got a horse waitin’ there for him, then I’m gonna be lucky to get one
shot.
Coaxing as much speed as he could
out of his old legs, he reached the gap between the buildings and brought the
revolver up to level.
A woman stood in the shade between the
buildings. “Gonna shoot me, Seth?” A copper handgun version of his Lightning
Rifle was in her hand, aimed at the man who now twitched on the ground at her
feet.
“I was wonderin’ if you were gonna
show up here,” Seth said, lowering the revolver. “What’d’ja do to him, anyway?”
Her lips curled into a sly smile,
and her eyes were almost obscured by the short brim of the bowler hat on her
head. “Clumsy me; I grabbed my Lightning Pistol instead of my Derringer.”
“You shot him with the Lightning?
You know them’s for the Automatons, and not people.” He stepped over the prone
man, and held the revolver trained at the face. “There’s no tellin’ how long
the effects’ll last on a man.”
“Interesting that it seems to have
about the same effect on him, as it has on Automatons.” Her finger stayed on
the trigger. “I could always hit him again, unless, of course, you’d rather haul
his dead body all the way back to Phoenix.”
“He’d be less trouble that way.”
“Not sure he would smell much worse,
either.” She nudged the man with a booted foot. “I know this is a desert, but
there are baths available. You really should avail yourself of them from time
to time.”
“So, are the Pinkertons gonna take
credit for this one?”
“Well, I did capture him for you.”
Seth removed the man’s pistol, and rolled
him onto his belly. “So you did. You still got them fancy cuffs of yours?”
“Of course.” She dropped them on the
man’s back.
“Much obliged.” He bound the man’s
hands together, just as the local sheriff and a deputy ran up to them.
The sheriff had his gun on them. “You
wanna explain what’s goin’ on?”
“Seth Holtwick, with the Arizona
Rangers.” He stood up, and turned so his badge was showing. “We’ve been after
this feller for a while. He’s been stealin’ Automatons, tinkerin’ with ‘em
somehow to make ‘em act all crazy, and then uses ‘em for a distraction to make
robberies easier.”
“You came to my town, and didn’t
think you oughta let me know?” The sheriff had his gun lowered, but didn’t
holster it.
“If you knew a Ranger was in town,
then likely others’d know, too. If he’d gotten wind that I was here, he’d’ve
been miles away by now. You’re welcome to take it up with the Governor, if you’ve
a mind to, but I don’t ‘spect he’ll tell you much different.”
The sheriff released an annoyed
huff, and slid his revolver back into the holster.
Seth smiled. “If you’n your deputy
would be so kind as to take this man back to your jail, I’d be much obliged. I
need to send a telegraph to Phoenix to let ‘em know we have him, and make
arrangements to take him in for trial.”
The two local lawmen lifted the man,
and dragged him off towards the jail.
“I’m hurt, Seth. You didn’t
introduce me.” She put the Lightning Pistol into a safe condition, and slid it
out of sight.
“Yeah, well, I figgered if he wasn’t
none too happy with an Arizona Ranger in his town, he might be even less happy
with a Pinkerton.”
“He probably would not have even
believed I’m with Pinkerton.”
“So, what do we do now?”
“Well, you could buy me a drink.”
He offered her his arm. “Always good
to see you, Shal.”
“You too, Seth.” She patted his arm
as they turned towards the saloon. “I see you still have a cannon up your
sleeve.”
“Always afraid to ask what you got
up your sleeve.”
“Maybe I’ll show you someday.”
2 comments:
Great story. You left me wanting to read more...
Oho! That was fun! I don't usually read Steampunk, mostly because it's hard to find it well done, but I think you did a fairly decent job. I was interested to see how you would handle the world and the characters and you didn't disappoint. I liked how the details weren't overwhelming, but necessary--like the glint of Seth's rifle, how it could have caused trouble, so he was careful not to let it show and so on. Is this part of a larger piece at any time in the future? I kind of want to know more about these Pinkertons...Good job! Glad I was able to find some time to read this holiday weekend. ^_^
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