tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7491574942132835063.post317478604067308435..comments2023-07-16T02:43:40.558-07:00Comments on Pod Tales and Ponderings: Friday Fiction for 16 August 2013Hoomihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02973191696885626922noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7491574942132835063.post-85571800815551343362013-08-30T20:41:04.220-07:002013-08-30T20:41:04.220-07:00Awww, poor Timothy. I remember the original piece ...Awww, poor Timothy. I remember the original piece of this and I went back to read it again. I love the changes you've made. It flows easier and I can understand some of Timothy's reaction better, having seen the little glimpses of like, why locking up bothers him and the conversation with the FMC and her "normal" legs is better transitioned. Lovely, lovely snippet. I always love reading in this Pod world of yours. Sara Harricharanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07050427684753490067noreply@blogger.com