Friday Fiction for February 27th, 2009

Friday Fiction this week is hosted at Beth’s Laughing at the Days. Beth posts delightful poetry, so be sure to visit her page for her latest wonderful submission, and for Mr. Linky to lead you to other terrific Friday Fiction.

Based on the reactions to last week’s story, I decided to write another installment for this week. This part offers a little different perspective on the events of last week, so without further ado, I hope you enjoy this week’s submission.

The Chase, Pt. II
By Rick Higginson

Rebecca crawled up the gentle slope to Eva’s Pool, and took a position next to the elder mermaid. Looking out over the Family Room, she made herself comfortable and said, “You wanted to talk to me, Eva?”

Eva nodded, but didn’t divert her attention from the various activities below. “I assume you’ve heard about the arrangement between Elizabeth and Richard?”

She giggled. “I’ve known for years that he’s been infatuated with her. I’m surprised he finally told her.”

“Are you okay with it? I don’t want anything going on that could create animosities among the Pod.”

“Why wouldn’t I be okay with it? I mean, other than the fact that Elizabeth is almost as fast in the water as you and Marta are, so Richard has just slightly better chances of catching her as I have of waking up someday looking like a fashion model, it’s fine.”

“Mmm hmm; so you don’t have a problem with the man that Dr. Marcel had planned for you, being interested in someone else?”

Rebecca snorted. “Dr. Marcel was good at many things, but not so much at any kind of romantic planning. I love Richard; I always have, but not that way.”

“You understand this may mean that there will never be a man for you in the Pod, don’t you?”

“Eva, you of all people should remember the decision that was made when Dr. Marcel disappeared, and we accepted that he might not come back.”

“We weren’t going to bring children into the life we had to lead,” Eva said. “Things are different now.”

“Things may be, but we’re not. None of the men in the Pod have what I consider an essential trait in a husband or mate or whatever we might call them.”

“What’s that?”

“Legs; Eva, if I can’t have a man with legs instead of a dolphin tail, then I’m fine with never having a man at all. It doesn’t matter that we’re told our children won’t inherit the modifications Dr. Marcel gave us; if I’m going to have children, I want them to have more of a life than this.”

“You’ve thought this through, then?”

“Look at the television right now, Eva. Yeah, it’s a dumb comedy, but the kids in that show are doing some kind of play or production, and their parents are in the audience, watching. Maybe our children could be those kids, but we could never be those parents.” She watched until the commercial break. “I can never be that kind of mother, but if I’m ever going to have children, then it has to be with someone who can be that kind of father.”

Eva watched the program in silence for a few minutes. “You know, it’s rather sad when we envy sit-com characters.”

“It’d be sadder still if we decided to act like them.”

“True; if this were a sit-com, you would be plotting ways to sabotage Elizabeth and Richard.”

“Sabotage?” She laughed. “I told Richard if he wants someone to help him work out and get faster, I’d be happy to do whatever I can.”

“You know, I believe you would.”

The Pod carried on their activities about the room. Some watched the television show, others rested away from the water and read books; still more than a few chased and played in the pool. Daniel and Suzanne teased about for a while, before disappearing through the tunnel for one of the old chambers where they could be alone.

Before long, Joshua Cardan would arrive with the large cart from the kitchen, bringing the dinner prepared by the former Navy cook he’d hired a few months earlier. Their meals had improved dramatically with the addition of the trained professional, and it was all but guaranteed everyone would be back in time for the food. It was just one more of the ongoing changes their lives had seen in the previous two years.

“The day may come,” Eva finally said. “When you’ll have the chance to make those choices. I’m glad to hear you’ve already put a lot of thought into them. I trust you’ll respect if other members of the Pod reach different decisions?”

“Have I ever given you a reason to think I’d try and tell anyone else what to do around here?”

“No, you’ve always been one of the quieter members of the Pod. I think Gretchen got all the assertiveness in your family.”

“What about you, Eva? What would you decide?”

“I don’t think much about it, Rebecca. I don’t believe it will ever be an option for me, and I’d rather not dwell on what I can’t have. I prefer to find my happiness in seeing the members of my Pod being happy.”

“I guess that’s where I’m at, too. Richard and I grew up together, and I’ve never seen him act so alive as he has since Elizabeth gave him some hope. I’m happy for him, and if he ever manages to catch her, I think I’ll be just as ecstatic as he will be.” She scooted towards the spillway leading back to the main pool. “I think I’ll go shower off before dinner, if we’re done.”

“Go on; we can always talk more later, if I think of anything else.”

Rebecca slid down the spillway and swam beneath the surface towards one of the two bathrooms. I’ll be fine if there’s never a man in my life, she thought.

It would be nice, though, if someone wanted to chase me.

Friday Fiction for February 20th, 2009

Friday Fiction this week is hosted by Yvonne, on her blog, My Back Door. Don’t miss the other fiction submissions being posted this week.

This week, I’m happy to post an absolutely brand-spankin’-new Pod short story, finished just this evening. This scene is hinted at in the second Pod story, Marta’s Pod, and I had the urge to flesh out the situation a bit more. This story takes place almost directly between Cardan’s Pod and Marta’s Pod, about two years after the closing scenes of the first story, and two years before the second story.

Having watched “Fireproof” a week ago, I sometimes wonder what our relationships would be like if we had to work harder for them, much as Jacob labored so many years for the woman he loved. That which is achieved easily is easily taken for granted, and that is the one feeling we should never have for those we love.

The Chase
By Rick Higginson

Richard watched the teasing play between Daniel and Suzanne from the far end of the pool. Now that they were eighteen, the Pod rules allowed the young couple to take their relationship beyond the platonic. The occasional glance was sent towards him and Rebecca, since they were also now eighteen.

His glance, however, turned elsewhere. Elizabeth had long, inky black hair that flowed straight back until it tickled to either side of the vertebrae ridge at the base of her tail. Her human skin was a lovely shade of brown, highlighting the mix of Hispanic and Native American heritage that Dr. Marcel’s records said she had.

She made a low leap, heading for the ocean outside, and Richard dove to follow. Random shafts of sunlight flashed from the surface through the shallow depths, illuminating the mermaid just ahead. Jumping for a breath, she trailed a glittering path of small bubbles, tracing her turn towards the old chamber.

He leapt for his own breath, leaving the water for a brief moment to feel the warm, summer air on his skin. Splashing back at a steeper angle than she had, he used the momentum of the jump to boost his speed towards the short underwater tunnel, where Elizabeth had just vanished out of sight.

Cassiopeia, Andromeda, and Aphrodite sped up beside him, eager to see if some game was about to begin. They were quickly passed by Perseus and Orion, two juvenile males who chased ahead after Elizabeth. The young dolphins would likely leave soon, once they discovered that no game was imminent, but he expected the three older females to stay and keep watch.

Reaching the chamber side of the tunnel, he found Perseus and Orion worrying a large crab in the rocks. The crustacean waved its claws, trying to keep the playful dolphins at bay until it could back into a deep enough crack in the rocks. Whether its defensive posture would protect it from becoming a dolphin toy remained to be determined, and Richard refused the potentially amusing distraction.

He surfaced in front of Elizabeth, hoping the arms folded tight across her chest were not a bad sign.

“Are you following me?” she asked.

“Yes,” he replied.

“Did Eva send you to tell me something?”

“No.”

“Then, if you don’t mind, I wanted to just spend a little time alone, away from the noise in the Family Room.”

“I just wanted to talk to you alone, away from the noise.”

She sighed. “What is it, Richard?”

“I’ve been wanting to ask you something for a long time, and it just seems like the right time to do so.”

“Ask me what?”

He felt his heart pounding, along with a weird feeling in his stomach. “Would you ever consider – I mean, is it possible that you could ever love me?”

“Of course, I love you. You’re a member of the Pod.”

“I mean, love me like Suzanne loves Daniel.”

“Shouldn’t you ask Rebecca that?”

“I’ve never felt this way about Rebecca, and she’s never felt this way about me. Maybe Dr. Marcel had something else planned, but she’s always treated me more like a sibling than a suitor, and to be honest, she’s more like a sister to me as well.”

“I’m four years older than you.”

“I don’t care. For as long as I can remember, it’s been you that I’ve been attracted to. I’ve always done everything I could to try and impress you.”

She laughed. “Is that why you always tried to do better than me in our lessons and in the foraging?”

“I thought, maybe, if you saw that I was smart and capable, despite being younger, you might feel about me the way I feel about you.”

“And all this time, I thought you were just trying to prove you were better than me.”

“I was trying to prove I was worthy of you.”

She drew close to his face and lowered her voice. “You really want a chance to prove you’re worthy of me? I’ll tell you what; the day you can catch me in a fair chase in open water, I’ll consider a relationship with you.”

“I just have to catch you?”

“Yep; no tricks, though. It doesn’t count if you sneak up behind me, grab me, and say you caught me. You have to show you can swim faster than I can, and in the ocean, not in a confined area like this or the Family Room.” She poked a gentle finger in the center of his chest. “I haven’t really thought much about ever having a man, and I’m fine with my life staying that way, but if I am going to entertain the idea of spending my life with someone, he’s going to have to be able to keep up with me. Think you’re up to that?”

He grinned confidently. “I’m ready anytime.”

She drifted onto her back, opening some distance between them. “You think so? Fine; the chase begins as soon as we’re outside the tunnel.” She dove backwards, out of sight.

It took a moment for her words to register, before he made a low leap to dive after her. She was turning towards the opening, apparently having made a sweeping curve around the perimeter. He stroked hard with his tail, speeding straight towards the tunnel and closing the distance between them.

Elizabeth was only a few yards ahead when they emerged into the sunlit ocean. She gave a quick, backward glance at him and smiled. With her arms tight against her side, she darted deep along the rocky bottom.

Fish scattered as she sped past, and he increased his effort to catch her. The distance between them remained constant, even as she kicked towards the surface. He followed her arc through the leap, exhaling just before leaving the water and sucking in a deep breath before splashing through the foam in her wake.

What hope he had vanished as he watched her tail undulate faster, opening the gap between them with little apparent effort. With every bit of strength he had left, he tried to keep up, only to have her disappear in the deepening blue ahead of him.

He returned to the Family Room, surfacing to find her waiting just inside the gate. While he was winded, she seemed as though the swim had been no effort at all. “Were you just playing with me?” he asked.

Her smile was satisfied, but not mocking. “I am not going to make this easy for you; if you want a chance with me, you’re going to have to work for it. I don’t think you’d respect me if I just let you catch me, and I-” She teased a finger through his wet hair. “- won’t respect you if you give up trying.” Just touching the tip of her nose to his, she added. “You can try again next week.”

“Next week,” he agreed. Someday, he thought as she swam over to talk to her sister, the chase is going to surprise you.

He headed for one of the refrigerators for a cold drink. Someday, he promised himself.

Friday Fiction for February 13th, 2009

Friday Fiction is hosted this week by Julie on her blog, The Surrendered Scribe. Be sure to visit Mr. Linky for loads of terrific Friday Fiction.

This week’s submission is a character sketch I wrote a couple of years ago. While I didn’t want anything more from it than just to explore Josh’s past a bit, it turned out to be a short scene that really just seemed to click.

The Sound of Her Voice
A character sketch by Rick Higginson

“Do you miss your house on the mainland, Josh?”

He rested on his back, staring up towards the ceiling in the dark room, with Marta’s head pillowed on his chest. “There are a few features it had that I miss, but the house itself? I think of it as Cynthia’s house, and what good memories I have of living there are tarnished by what she turned out to be. It’s kind of hard to get too nostalgic about a place you shared with someone who wanted to kill you. I miss the home I grew up in far more than the place I shared with her.”

“What do you miss about where you grew up?”

He thought a moment, smiling in the darkness. “It’s the memories I miss, and it was the memories that made me sell it after my dad died.”

“Tell me one,” she said. “Tell me something about that house that you really miss.”

“Is there a point to this prodding through my past?”

She rubbed her fingers through the fine hair on his belly. “We’re trying to make a home here, aren’t we? None of us has much concept of what that is like for normal people, and I want to know what kinds of things stuck with you.”

“My favorite memory doesn’t sound like much; promise you won’t laugh?”

“No, but you’ll tell me anyway, won’t you?”

“Can I hold out for some nice persuasion?”

“I suppose you could, but you never hold out for long, so you might as well just go ahead.”

He caressed her bare shoulder with his fingertips. “I miss the library in my parents’ old house,” he said.

“You had a library?”

“That’s what Mom and Dad called it. It was just a modest sized room with a fireplace on one wall, a few old comfortable chairs, and all the bookshelves Dad could squeeze in without getting too close to the hearth. There was no television, or stereo, or videogames allowed in the library. It was just for books and reading.”

“Mmm,” she said. “That sounds nice.”

“My favorite memories are of winter nights we’d spend in there. Dad would build a fire, and all three of us would sit and read. Mom really pushed me when it came to reading; she said it was not just important to be able to read for comprehension, but also to be able to enunciate well when reading aloud.”

“She sounds like she was a wise woman. I wish I could have met her.”

He laughed. “That would have been an interesting meeting, but yeah; I wish you could have met both my parents.” He kissed the top of her head. “Mom had an incredible reading voice. I remember some nights when Dad would put his book down, close his eyes, and say, ‘what are you reading, Esther?’ Mom would just start reading aloud wherever she was in her book, whether she was in the middle of a chapter or a paragraph. She’d start at the beginning of the next sentence and read to him.”

“I think that would be confusing.”

“Sometimes, but it didn’t matter. Mom put so much into her reading that we enjoyed listening to her even if we didn’t have a clue what was going on. Dad told me years later that he was never interested in the story she was reading; he was just interested in the sound of her voice.”

“Was that why you liked listening to her?”

“For me, it was her voices. Mom would try and give each character its own sound, and it could get really funny sometimes depending on what kind of book she was reading.”

She was quiet for a minute. “I don’t understand something, though; your memories sound so wonderful, and yet you said they were why you sold your parents’ house after your dad died. Why not keep it if you remember things so fondly?”

“I couldn’t live with the ghosts.”

“Ghosts? The house was haunted?”

“In a way,” he said. “After Mom died, I would find Dad sitting in the library all alone with his eyes closed, and one night I asked him what he was doing. He said he was listening to the sound of her voice. He said if he listened real close, he could still hear her reading in the echoes of the room.” He shifted positions and rubbed his nose with the back of one arm. “Dad was sitting in that chair the night the cancer finally got so bad that I had to call an ambulance. He didn’t want to go, though; I think he wanted to just remain in that chair the rest of his life.” He took a deep breath and expelled it slowly. “He died at the hospital two days later. I continued to stay at the house, but there were too many times I thought I heard one of my parents say something, or I thought I would see them somewhere. There was never anything there; it was just the memories bringing back something that had been said or done years before, and my mind would fill in the blank by thinking one of them was in the room.”

“So that made you decide to sell the house?”

“That was part of it, but the decision was really made when I woke up for the third day in a row in the library, after having fallen asleep the night before sitting in there and hoping to hear the echoes my dad said he could hear. I realized that morning that fond memories were nice, but if I wasn’t careful I was going to do just as my dad did and end up wasting what was left of my life sitting in that room.”

“Do you think we’ll have a room like that someday?”

He smiled as he considered the question. “We already do,” he said. “This plain little room where we lie beside each other and talk and dream and share whatever is on our minds; these are the moments we’re going to look back on with such fondness someday.” He gave her a gentle squeeze and kissed the top of her head again. “Your turn; I’ve told you something that I remember from my youth. Tell me one of your favorite memories.”

She kissed the skin of his chest. “I remember the first time I was outside and saw a sailboat going by in the distance,” she said.

He closed his eyes as she recalled the memory, not caring whether the details remained consistent or disjointed. With a satisfied sigh, he listened to the sound of her voice.

Friday Fiction for February 6th, 2009

Since this blog is “Pod Tales and Ponderings”, it occurred to me that I really should add ponderings on a more regular basis. As such, I’d like to include some thoughts on this week’s Friday Fiction following the story. Be sure to visit Sherri’s blog, A Candid Thought, for Mr. Linky this week and more great fiction.

Just over six months ago, I took the plunge and entered the Faithwriters Weekly Challenge for the first time. The topic that week was “Patience”, and being one hundred percent new to the Challenge, I didn’t realize the topics each quarter all related to each other by a specific category. In this case, “Patience” referred to a game, not to the general concept of patience.

I wrote “The Watch” and submitted it, receiving quite a bit of positive feedback on the story despite it not placing in the final standings.

The Watch

Topic: Patience
Challenge Entry, Week of August 21, 2008

He stretched out in the cool grass and watched the door, keeping the old ball close between his front paws. The master would return soon, and he would be ready. Until then, he would do as he always did, and watch over the master’s home. For now, no threats were close, and he could wait in peace. The master always returned.

Nighttime came, and it was strange that the master wasn’t home yet. The master always opened the door and called for him before dark. He would chase the ball for the master until it was too dark for the master to see it, and then they would go inside. They would have a meal, and then he would curl up at the master’s feet. It shouldn’t be much longer; he could wait. The master always returned.

Other houses in the neighborhood called their dogs in, and soon were dark. His ears perked at the sound of one of the strange, noisy vehicles wailing in the distance. The master had left in one such vehicle, carried to it by two men. Perhaps the screaming vehicle was bringing the master home, and he looked in the direction of the sound. It was moving away, though, not coming closer. With a yawn, he laid his head on the ball, returning his eyes to the door. He would just have to wait a while longer. The master always returned.

He slept, occasionally waking to one noise or another, wondering if he was hearing the master’s return. The door, however, remained closed, and the ball ready between his paws. The master had said he would be back, and would find him waiting. The master always returned.

When the sun began to warm the damp grass, he picked up the ball and trotted his rounds, inspecting the periphery of the yard for anything amiss. It was one of the jobs he did for the master, and he wanted the master to be pleased that everything was in order and safe when he returned.

His patrol completed, he sat by the door and looked through the glass, holding the ball so that the master would see it as soon as he came home. They always played ball when the master returned.

In the afternoon, he moved back to the cool grass and watched the door, ignoring the hunger gnawing at his belly. The master had missed their meal, so there must have been something very important to keep him away. The master was good and trustworthy. They would have a special meal when the master returned.

The day ended, and still the door remained closed. What could be keeping the master? The master had never been gone this long before, but no matter; he would be waiting and ready regardless of how long it took. The master always returned.

He slept, and dreamed of the master. He held the ball up, and the master took it, smiling and laughing before throwing it across the yard. He would happily chase the ball for as long as the master wanted to throw it, just so that they could be together when the master returned.

Walking his patrol the next morning to conserve energy, he sniffed at each side and corner of the fence. He dropped the ball beside the water dish, and was lapping up the remnants of the water when he heard a click. Raising his ears, he looked towards the door before snatching up the ball and bounding towards the house.

The master always returned.


I love dogs. My wife and I have five Australian Shepherds, and I have been amazed over the years at the lessons that God has taught me through these wonderful companions. I would not be surprised to learn that God created that bond between humans and dogs before we left the Garden, and that He did so to teach us about the kind of relationship we could have with Him.

You see, dogs are not stupid. While there are some breeds that are not well known for their intelligence, the number of breeds that are quite smart are numerous, including the Aussies. For the most part, the limiting factor in training a dog like an Aussie is communicating to the dog what you want him to do. It is in their nature to want to please, and while it might sound like pet industry propaganda, most dogs will do anything they can for their master’s praise.

A good dog waits for us, and earnestly desires being with us. We could be gone for days or just minutes, and the dog is thrilled by our return. We call the dog, and he runs eagerly to us. If you lose your temper with the dog, or accidentally step on his tail, he doesn’t hold a grudge. Call him in love, and all is forgotten.

Would that I were that kind of servant to my Master.

It was interesting to read the comments following this challenge entry. I worked on the theme of waiting patiently, having faith in the master’s return, much as we were commanded to watch and wait for our Master’s return. We were told to not lose heart, but to be ready at any moment for Him. The allegory was not lost on the readers, but I was fascinated by the way different people read the ending.

You see, I purposely told the story from the dog’s POV, and ended it before the dog reaches the back door. He hears the door opening, and runs with confidence that the master has returned, but the story does not say whether it really is the master, or whether someone else has arrived to care for the dog until the master does return.

Our master tarries, and at times we’ve thought we heard Him coming back, but still we watch and wait. Do we, like the dog, continue to wait for the Master even if the sound we hear isn’t His return, or do we grow discouraged and stop believing in His return? Are we ready to run at a moment’s notice for the door, or have we grown disillusioned, and we’ll just lie in our corner until He has to come looking for us?

The Master always returns.

Happy Anniversary

It is now February 2nd.

Twenty-nine years ago today, Nancy and I stood before Rev. John Shumate and exchanged our vows, and started this incredible adventure called marriage.

Happy anniversary, my love. There's no one in the world I'd rather share my life with, or to look forward to each Groundhog's Day with.

Arise, my darling, my fair one, and come along.

I love you.

Friday Fiction for January 30, 2009

Friday Fiction is hosted this week by Dorinda on her Treasures in Jars of Clay blog. Be sure to check in there for more great fiction, and also be sure to check out LauraLee’s interview as the Featured Author on Faithreaders. It’s a terrific interview, and one you shouldn’t miss.

This week’s fiction is another original, written for Friday Fiction. I’ve been considering a story, or series of stories, about a rover character. I’ve done a few short sketches of him in various situations, but wanted a short sketch that introduced both him and the ship. The actual story, when I finally get around to writing it, will be set in the Terran Archipelago of my Eridani stories, and I already have a pretty good idea of what I want to happen in that first story, well after this first introduction.

I hope you enjoy…

Stardreamer
By Rick Higginson

He entered the tiny cockpit and felt his heart beating faster. He’d never expected to be there so soon, and the thought of his father once resting in the solitary seat brought a tear to his eye. “May the final dream be one of love and joy,” he sang the traditional blessing for a deceased relative. “May my father be welcomed to the arms of our mothers, and share in the peace of our God.” Though it seemed odd to do so for a man that had been in space for most of his life, he lowered his eyes in respect for the appropriate duration.

With nervous anticipation, he settled into the seat and reclined back. The ship’s computer sensed the pressure of his body, and molded the cushion to fit him until it seemed he rested on nothing. He settled his left arm into a recess provided for it, and nearly jumped out of the seat.

Knowing ahead of time that the cybernetic implant in his arm would make him one with the ship was one thing; experiencing it for the first time was another. He closed his eyes, and felt the warm tarmac beneath the landing struts. He could see the terminal buildings in the distance through the optical sensors, and with barely a thought, magnify them until he focused on tiny details in the wall. The cargo rested in the hold, and the mechanical retainers that held it securely in place were as his fingers. Relaxing his grip, he shifted one of the containers a short distance, and sensed the change in the balance of the load.

“You are the offspring of my previous symbiote,” the ship said to him through the interface. There was no sound; the sensation was like the others induced into him. “Do you wish to access the memories he entrusted to my storage?”

“Do I need them to safely pilot you?”

“No. All that you will need, you will have once the protocols have synchronized. By Archipelago law, you must grant specific permission before I can initiate the synchronization sequence. Once the protocols are synchronized, then any time you are in that seat, we will be a single operating system. Do you understand this?”

“I understand. I do not wish to access the memories at this time.”

“Do you grant permission for synchronization?”

“Permission is granted.”

A moment of disorientation swept over him, followed by the strangest sensation of no longer being in his body, but rather of holding it in a gentle embrace. Before, he had needed to think about what part of the ship he wanted to sense; now, it was if the ship was his body, and he processed all the sensations with natural awareness. If a system malfunctioned, there would be pain; since everything felt right, he was ready for flight.

All the hatches closed and sealed, their integrity verified with no more effort than holding his breath would have taken. He looked upward, scanning and plotting his path safely beyond the orbit of the moons, and then transmitted the plan to orbital control.

“Temple City Control, this is Stardreamer requesting approval and clearance for filed departure vector,” he said directly through the transmitter.

“Stardreamer, you have approval and clearance for departure. Please observe noise abatement measures until achieving ten kilometers of altitude.”

“Affirmative, control.” He lifted from the ground and made a gentle turn to follow his vector. He retracted the landing struts as he gradually accelerated to altitude, and delighted in the feel of the air’s movement and temperature against him. When the surface was over ten thousand meters below him, he leapt for orbit with a delightful rush of power. His skin grew cold, but it didn’t hurt. The air became thinner until it was non-existent, and he didn’t care. There was tightness in his throat, but not from suffocation. Instead, there was the sense of fulfillment of his fondest dreams.

He could leave a world behind and cross the void as easily as he’d once crossed the village of T’Cha. He didn’t just have his own ship; he was the ship, and as the larger of the two moons appeared ahead in his increasing orbit, he felt like God was laughing with him, dancing through the empty space like he’d once danced with his mother down the road.

Looking northward towards the faint yellow star, he increased the magnification sufficiently to plot his course. “Puerta del Cielo Control, I am Stardreamer, and I request clearance for Earthrise.”

Friday Fiction for January 23, 2009

Friday Fiction this week is being hosted by Patty on her blog, Patterings, where you’ll find Mr. Linky to direct you to other fine submissions.

I decided it had been too long since I’d posted anything original written specifically for this blog, and so wrote this short story. This event is mentioned briefly in Cardan’s Pod, and I thought today it might be fun to write the scene. This story takes place while Joshua Cardan and Diego Hyland are still in college, and over Spring Break, not only have they both flown home, Diego’s fiancée Sally has come along to meet her future in-laws. On this particular day, Josh has invited them to join him for a cruise on his sailboat, a few years before the opening scene of Cardan’s Pod.

The song Sally sings in this story is a real one, written and recorded by Christian artist Kemper Crabb, on his currently out-of-print album, “The Vigil”, and also on the album "Live from Rivendell". The Rivendell arrangement is available to listen to on Rhapsody. It’s a wonderful song, and has been one of my favorites for many years.

Wonders in the Deep
By Rick Higginson

“So, this is the sailboat I’ve heard so much about. I must confess, I was starting to wonder if it was real, or whether you two were just pulling my leg,” Sally said, walking alongside the vessel.

“Pulling your leg?” Josh said, laughing. “Diego, what have you been telling this girl about me?”

“Just the truth, Josh; I told her your family’s made millions in drug money.”

“Oh, thanks. Remind me not to hire you as a publicist when I take over the company someday.”

“Aye aye, Skipper.”

“So, how long are we going to be out today?” Sally asked.

“A three hour tour, a three hour tour,” Josh sang.

“That’s not funny. Seriously, where are we heading?”

“Oh, I figured we’d head out a little ways from shore, and just enjoy an easy cruise. We’ll be back well before dark, unless you two want to make this an overnighter.”

“Um, how many beds does this boat have?”

“Two doubles in the cabin; plenty of room for three people.”

She shook her head. “Unless you and Diego are planning on sharing one, there’s no way we’re staying overnight. Maybe it’s okay with you to sleep with someone before you’re married, but I was raised differently.”

“No problem; once we’re out to sea, I’m technically the captain and I can perform a wedding for you two.”

“No, thank you. Let’s just plan on being back before dark.”

“Yes, ma’am.” He looked at Diego. “Is she always this bossy?”

“When it comes to my reputation, yes,” she said.

Advancing the throttle to cruise dead-slow through the marina, he steered away from the berth and towards the channel leading to the ocean. Once clear of the breakwater, he gave her a bit more speed until he was out of the traffic lane, and then cut the engine. Trimming the sails, he let the breeze push them on a leisurely course south.

Diego and Sally took a seat on one of the benches near the wheel. “Now this,” Diego said, “is the way to spend Spring Break.”

“If you ask me, this is the way to spend a lot more time than just Spring Break. I keep considering taking a year off after we graduate, and just sailing down the coast and off to maybe Bermuda or Puerto Rico. I’d love to do some traveling on the Bitter Pill,” Josh said.

Sally pulled some sunscreen from her tote bag, and began applying it to her arms. “I’ve been meaning to ask you about that name; why do you call your boat the Bitter Pill?”

“My Dad taught me to sail when I was a kid, and during High School, I kept bugging my parents for my own sailboat. They told me if I graduated with decent grades, they’d give me one for a graduation present. The day they gave it to me at the marina, Dad told me that it was mine, that taking care of it was my responsibility, and that I was liable to find owning a boat was a bitter pill to swallow. While I was still thinking about what to name her, I kept telling them I was going to go visit my bitter pill, and one day it just kind of stuck. Mom thought it was an especially appropriate name, considering the family business.”

She laughed. “Having a beautiful boat like this is a bitter pill? I find that hard to believe.”

“Want to see the monthly bill for her berth?”

“Well, it doesn’t seem to be hurting you too much.”

A noise off to one side of the boat drew their attention, and Sally jumped to her feet. “Oh my gosh; did you see that? What was that?”

“I didn’t see it, but it sounded like a whale spouting,” Josh replied.

It took several minutes of watching before the whale not only surfaced again, it leapt out of the water to splash sideways back into the waves.

“That was so awesome!” Sally said, barely above a whisper.

“I see them do that from time to time,” Josh explained. “They’re migrating from the Caribbean up to the waters off Massachusetts this time of year.”

“They’re so beautiful,” she said, and started singing quietly.

“What’s that song?”

“Oh; it’s one I heard many years ago, taken from Psalm 107.” She sang it again, loud enough for him to hear. “They that go down to the sea in ships, and do business in great waters; these see the works of the Lord, these see the works of the Lord, and His wonders in the deep.”

“That’s a nice song.”

“You should get a plaque that says that for your boat,” she said. “You must have seen some incredible wonders in all the times you’ve been out sailing.”

He shrugged. “After a while, you just kind of get used to seeing such things.”

“You should never get used to seeing wonders. I think we should always be amazed by the things God has done.”

She expressed similar sentiments many times through the remainder of the day, and by the time they cruised back into the marina, Josh wondered if her response to an overnight trip would be different if he offered again. You’re a lucky man, Diego, he thought. Her kind of joy is rare to find.

“I should call my folks to come pick us up,” Diego said.

“What do you two have planned for tonight?” Josh asked.

“Not much; we’ll probably just sit around and visit with my parents.”

“Why don’t you go out tonight?”

“That’d be nice, but my sister already has dibs on the car this evening.”

He eased into the berth and killed the engine, as Diego scrambled to get the forward mooring line. Josh secured the aft, and then resumed the conversation. “Why don’t you take mine? I’m not planning on going anywhere tonight. Dad wants me to read over some of the financial reports for the company, so he can quiz me about them tomorrow. He says if he’s going to pay for my education, he wants to know that I’m learning the right stuff.”

“Are you sure?”

“Go have fun,” he said, passing the keys and a couple of folded bills to Diego.

“Josh,” Diego said, trying to hand the money back to him.

“The skipper pays his crew; go have fun.” He accepted an embrace from his friend, and a more casual one from Sally, and watched the two walk towards the parking lot. When they were out of sight, he went into the cabin, poured himself a drink, and pulled a stack of papers from a case, absently singing, “…and His wonders in the deep.”